Roads
I looked at him
while crying,
I knew
there was no use of trying.
You left and moved
towards the wood,
And I stood there,
like you said I should.
Every path I take is black,
I wonder if you ever
going to come back?
Whenever these roads
try to threaten me,
I wish upon him,
but never came he.
I know you closed every door
which led you my way,
Damn!
I still keep my hopes high
for another day.
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I love the rhythm in this piece! 🙂
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Depth of pain!
Glad you can relate.
Been there.
This is really lovely and what an amazing scene.
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Yes, beautifully depicting to imagine it unfolding.
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Lovely 💛
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My pleasure always dear 🌻 Have a beautiful day ☕
A beautiful write!! 🙂
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Touching…beautiful👌
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Deep & beautiful piece dear
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I hope so too 😞
I know this feeling oh so well.
This is a beautiful piece.
https://mariamshittu.com/2018/10/02/ill-let-you-in/
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Excellent stuff!
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pleasure is mine!
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The Rhyming… well crafted. That’s full of pain….
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This is amazing ❤️❤️❤️💯
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This is too good. 💕
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It’s my pleasure 🎈
This is really a beautiful poem!! Lots of feelings! Elegant!
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This poem is heartbreakingly beautiful ♥️
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Lovely post!
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Wow .. its amazing 😊
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This is tremendously beautiful 🙂
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Like the one that got away
And how we will somehow always keep waiting for them
Lovely piece!
Exactly.
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Beautiful!
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Beautifully depicted….
Keep writing ☺
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Nice and interesting…
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This is sad and wonderful – beautifully written :O) x
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Very emotional and a really beautiful pic! ^^
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Greatly written.
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The road not taken 2 ❤
Yes.
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excellent work
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Love is like fire, warmth and burn both in a package. You have to depend on it even when its not there, its in our blood. The embodiment of love and passion, attimes is like a fire-sea, the greater its waves the more we fall for it.
You just explained every aspect of love so beautifully.
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I did not. Your poem did. I am just a humble reader.
Gud you liked this one 😇
Glad you liked this one 😇
So beautifully written, mashallah.
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welcome
Every path you take is black but still you live on hope. Sad but the human spirit is strong.
Hope is the only thing left to make a human strong enough to live 😊.
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Hope is eternal
Indeed!
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The emotion conveyed perfectly and coyly with nice tempo. I enjoyed but had troubles with changing POV from him to you and other such things. Sorry if that came out as critical. Keep rocking.
I’m absolutely open for reviews.
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Excellent poems….your poems are very meaningful!!!!Waiting for more…
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You write with so much ease. I would love to read all your poems.
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I really appreciate 😇
Beautifully written ❤ can relate.
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Wonderful ✌️♥️
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I have read a few of your poems that speak of a nebulous “he”, an unreliable love interest. The poems are descriptive of him. How about some poems that focus on YOU without mentioning “him”?. As you search yourself, your poems will begin to say even more. You have a good writing voice that is pleasant to hear. Thank you.
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I am planning to right about just me, from a long time. Will probably write soon. Thank you.
You’re amazing. Your poems are beautiful 💚
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beautiful