Death’s poem
You shall see me,
Where these horizons meet.
Stay here, quite,
Please, have a seat.
To end your sufferings,
I have come a long way.
I promise to take your pain
Sorrows and all desires away.
You have served the sphere,
During these days.
You still are unaware,
Of world’s greatest ways.
Don’t strain, come,
Accept these vacations.
Oh, mortal!
I, indeed, am the final destination.
_ Death.
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“You shall see me,
Where these horizons meet.” Great opening lines! So peaceful and eerie at the same time.
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I wanted to say thank you very much for your invitation and then I read the last line.
I would say thanks but no thanks, I am good here.😁.
You very much surprised me here as I did not read the title first.
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Amazing lines ✌️
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L enjoy the flow to the end
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Oh my goodness, didn’t expect that ending.
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Honestly, I thought there was going to be a positive twist the way it was going… thanks for your poetry
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Amazing. Indeed death is inevitable. Sure during the hour each shall be resurrected.
True that.
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Beautiful, indeed!!
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Great ……… I felt as if death was invited on the stage to introduce her
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Death was actually invited to introduce herself. Glad you caught the central idea 🌸
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Very nice write, I hope death has not a date for me as yet.
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Death – The final destination !
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Yes death where are you I am well prepared come
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I haven’t read any death poem till now.
Amazing
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Church lady commenting here. If death comes by way of suicide, it is not your friend. Don’t listen to even your own heart if it’s suggesting such a thing. Praying for God’s best in your life.
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Beautiful
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Incredible way to portray death….Really loved it.